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Corrections: Hitchhike​

Hitchhik​ ing isn't very usual in my country but when i I ranian s  use instegram  Instagram,  many of people eager do that . (what do you want to say here?) I think that it is so   very  hard but it is very excited exciting.  You don't know what will happen in future.  Who you will you see? What he/she will  say s to you? To Read: http://grammar.yourdictionary.com/capitalization/10-rules-of-capitalization.html (like Iranians, Instagram,...) http://www.englishteachermelanie.com/understanding-so-and-too-english-grammar-lesson/ http://englishteststore.net/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=14422:excited-vs-exciting-test&catid=260&Itemid=120

Corrections Education

In my country','  educational center's' are very different​ together  'from each other'. A few schools are really good'.' they  'They pay' attention to "their students' well-being and education" treatment and study of their students . But they are so expensive and  "that not many people" little person can use  "are able to afford" them. general  Public school"s" are really terrible. teachers  "T"eachers don't update​ their knowledge. "They" don't "pay" attention to students and this  these schools are very crowded. Study in home whit personal teacher  Homeschooling aren't usual is not very common. To Read: http://ieltsliz.com/capital-letters-in-ielts-will-it-affect-your-score/ http://www.bestieltsonline.com/punctuation-for-ielts-writing/
Cinema Cinema is follow by many of people. this art can show the culture of special aria and even chang that. Writer and director can show their belief in movie. Cinema is one of the important industry and that earns many money. In world people can make movie​ whit out any circumscription but here unfortunately censorship movies.
Hitchhike​ Hitchhike​ isn't very usual in my country but when iranian use instegram many of people eager do that. I think that so hard but it is very excited. You don't know what will happen in future. Who you will see? What he/she says to you? You learn and notice about many things. I love to experience that. How about you??
Eduction In my country  educational center are very different​ together. A few schools are really good they attention to treatment and study of their students. But they are so expensive and little person can use them. general school are really terrible. teachers don't update​ their knowledge. don't attention to students and this schools are very crowded. Study in home whit personal teacher aren't usual.

Corrections: Birthday Party

Last night , it was my cousin's party birthday party .  Now she is 18 years old. I think that is  it is  very important ​ in this age what to do   in this age.   ? ( a better sentence maybe: I think this is an important age)  When I was 18 years old I decided went to  reporter of collage (what does this mean?) I went there​ and spoke with them but they said   told  me you are very young now. t T hey didn't accept me.  Then I wanted  to  work  so  that  I  earn experience but I didn't find  a  job.  Usually bosses don't  show  confidence  in  younger people. To Study: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/say-or-tell Very good writing! great job!

Corrections: Environment

My teacher speak s about environment​ every Sunday. He said says(Either use a date like last week/last Sunday, or use present tense to show it is a common theme in his discussions)   now we can't control pollution anymore . We devise (what do you mean?)  earth with pollution, with out without any jungle s , healthy water and air for our children. He worried about trash of atomic nuclear waste .  We don't know what we can do to stop destruction of earth. (Great job using wh clause in the middle of the sentence!) Unfortunately when we  go to jungle the woods, we see many of trash lots of garbage . that seem  to  be the city dump. First we should speak with citizenship and want them to call up other people if they don't attention environment.   (what do you want to say here?) To Study: Present Tense https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/present-tense https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/present-tense/present-si