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Corrections: Experience

Do  Y y ou use experience of other people   other people's experiences  in your life?  I usually try to hear listen to other people's  experience s and the story of their lives other life .  I read book s to understand how people be come successful.  I read historic book s  to understand what did people have done. what are their thoughts? they thought? Life is very short and we can't experience all thing everything . By the way(what do you want to say here?)  we should take best decision s in our life and other people's  experience s can help us achieve this . To Study: You wrote 'I read historic books to understand what did people ...'. This is wrong because when a wh clause is in the middle of a sentence, the verb after that does not get in question form. So it should be: 'I read historic books to understand  what people did (or have done) ...' https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/clause-phrase-and-sentence

Corrections: Wedding Traditions

When a person decide s to  get  married ,   he /she  speaks  with his/her family.  Parents usually meet together several times . And   to  speak about discuss  different things.  ( Do you meen marriage or wedding?  Marriage  refers to the relationship, the long term sharing of two lives.  Wedding refers to the specific ceremony that unites two people in  marriage . )  Marriage The wedding ceremony  is very important in our culture. The   tradition of marriage The wedding traditions  is different ( from what?) . For example, wedding dresses are different based on the wedding location. In wedding  Someone wear especial clothes for their locality.  They play music and dance to celebrate the union of the two people.   To Study:  Capitalization section of 'English Grammar' app (with test) Read: http://www.diffen.com/difference/Marriage_vs_Wedding
When I was 5,6 years old I though what am I really?? Never Mystery solved. Now I 'm 21yeras but I don't find my answer exactly. I just know I should try, be happy, help other people, and be kind. I don't know philosophy of this life. I think people hard that with strange​ tradition, religion and how think about them other people. Last night I thought  just a blue clothes is ready for tomorrow. And I Should iron other clothes. I was very tired, I said to my self Mobina  that isn't important that wear this several times that important you love that and you want sleep now to be blithesome tomorrow.
experience You use experience of other people in your life? I usually try to hear experience and story of other life. I read book to understand how people be successful. I read historic book to understand what did people? what they thought? Life is very short and we can't experience all thing. By the way we should take best decision in our life and experience can help us.
When a person decide to married. He/she Speak with his/her family. Parents usually meet together several times. And speak about different things.  marriage is very important in our culture.  tradition of marriage is different. In wedding Someone wear especial clothes for their locality. They play music and dance.

Social problems (Corrections)

Today I meet met someone who cares about  social problems m probems are importan for them .   They very effort to acquaint other studends (I don't understand this sentence, what do you want to say?) . They have big ambition s . All of them sure can change many things (What do you want to say here?) . They spoke about release (do you mean freedom or liberty instead? release means آزاد شدن، آزاد کردن. freedom means آزادی) , justice, law, etc. I really don't know whether   T t hey will win or no succeed or not . That 's important they undrestand this way is true and try for it ( I don't understand this sentence, what do you want to say?) . To Study:  https://simple.wiktionary.org/wiki/whether 
 Social problems Today I meet somebody who social prombems are importan for them. They very effort to acquaint other studends. They have big ambition. All of them sure can change many things. They spoke about release, justice, law, etc. I really don't know They will win or no. That 's important they undrestand this way is true and try for it.
Today I shoud create a  new weblog. At first  T t hat sounded strange to me. My friends and I use Facebook, Instegram, Telegram (this sentence seems incomplete. It is usually 'use something to do something or for something)   . When I was 15 yeras years  old, (missing space) I created a weblog and I just copied news from x other webpages  to my blog y . I didn't like that. (missing space) There was no innovation in my blog. But now I want to write about different things. (missing space) t T his is like my daily book diary .  This is going to be interesting when I look back in the future as  I will understand how my ideas evolved over time. To Study:  http://ieltsliz.com/capital-letters-in-ielts-will-it-affect-your-score/ Specifically the part that talks about "When to use capital letters in grammar'
Today I shoud create new weblog. At first That sounded strange to me. My friends and I use Facebook, Instegram, Telegram. When I was 15 yeras old,I created a weblog and I just copied news from x to y. I didn't like that.There was no innovation in my blog. But now I want to write about different things.this is like my daily book. This is going to be interesting when I look back in the future. I undrestand how my ideas evolved over time.
Today I shoud create new weblog.at first That was stranger for me. My friends & I use facebook, instegram, telegram. When I was 15 yeras old,I created weblog and I just copy news from other site and paste them on my weblog I never didn't like that.my weblog was empty of innovation. But now I want write about different things.this is like my daily book. That will be interesting in future. I undrestand how my idea change in pass the time.