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Cinema Cinema is follow by many of people. this art can show the culture of special aria and even chang that. Writer and director can show their belief in movie. Cinema is one of the important industry and that earns many money. In world people can make movie​ whit out any circumscription but here unfortunately censorship movies.
Hitchhike​ Hitchhike​ isn't very usual in my country but when iranian use instegram many of people eager do that. I think that so hard but it is very excited. You don't know what will happen in future. Who you will see? What he/she says to you? You learn and notice about many things. I love to experience that. How about you??
Eduction In my country  educational center are very different​ together. A few schools are really good they attention to treatment and study of their students. But they are so expensive and little person can use them. general school are really terrible. teachers don't update​ their knowledge. don't attention to students and this schools are very crowded. Study in home whit personal teacher aren't usual.

Corrections: Birthday Party

Last night , it was my cousin's party birthday party .  Now she is 18 years old. I think that is  it is  very important ​ in this age what to do   in this age.   ? ( a better sentence maybe: I think this is an important age)  When I was 18 years old I decided went to  reporter of collage (what does this mean?) I went there​ and spoke with them but they said   told  me you are very young now. t T hey didn't accept me.  Then I wanted  to  work  so  that  I  earn experience but I didn't find  a  job.  Usually bosses don't  show  confidence  in  younger people. To Study: http://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/say-or-tell Very good writing! great job!

Corrections: Environment

My teacher speak s about environment​ every Sunday. He said says(Either use a date like last week/last Sunday, or use present tense to show it is a common theme in his discussions)   now we can't control pollution anymore . We devise (what do you mean?)  earth with pollution, with out without any jungle s , healthy water and air for our children. He worried about trash of atomic nuclear waste .  We don't know what we can do to stop destruction of earth. (Great job using wh clause in the middle of the sentence!) Unfortunately when we  go to jungle the woods, we see many of trash lots of garbage . that seem  to  be the city dump. First we should speak with citizenship and want them to call up other people if they don't attention environment.   (what do you want to say here?) To Study: Present Tense https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/present-tense https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/en/english-grammar/verbs/present-tense/present-si
Last night was my cousin's party birthday. Now she is 18years old. I think that is very important​ in this age what to do? When I was 18 years old I decided went to  reporter of collage. I went there​ and spoke with them but they said me you are very young now. they didn't accept me. Then I wanted work that earn experience but I didn't find job. Usually bosses don't confidence younger people.
My teacher speak about environment​ every Sunday. He said now we can't control pollution. We devise earth with pollution, with out any jungle, healthy water and air for our children. He worried about trash of atomic. We don't know what we can do to stop destruction of earth. Unfortunately when go to jungle see many of trash. that seem be the city dump. First we should speak with citizenship and want them to call up other people if they don't attention environment.

Corrections: Mystery

When I was 5 ,  or  6 years old I though used to think about:  what am I really?  This mystery has  N n ever Mystery   been  solved. Now I 'm   am  21yeras but I don't find have not found  my answer exactly. I just know I should try ,   to be happy,  to  help other people, and  to  be kind. I don't know philosophy( Do you mean philosophy or purpose? ) of this life. I think people hard( What do you mean here? ) that with strange​ tradition, religion and how think about them other people. Last night I thought  just a blue clothes is ready for tomorrow. And I Should iron other clothes. I was very tired, I said to my self Mobina  that isn't important that wear this several times that important you love that and you want sleep now to be blithesome tomorrow. ( what is the relation between this part and first section? ) Note: You started this post very well. The main issue I see is the disconnect between first part of your writing up to 'other people.' and t
How of patient is enough for every person? My friend always say every body should be patient. She believe pass the time solve many of our problems.  expectance for every things is very hard you should try and hope arrive that things you want. That essential we say to ourself every day though we be sad or happy our life passed and don't stop for us. So enjoy this short time.